This is part of a series by editor Barbara McNichol to provide tips that help you write like a pro.
You’ve probably been urged to use “active” verbs when you write but do you know why? Because sentences written with active verbs:
- Clearly spell out the action being performed and who is doing it.
- Convey the ideas more quickly and directly than passive sentences.
- Frequently require fewer words than passive sentences when space is limited.
Two clues help you identify “passive” use in a sentence: 1) the word “by” and 2) variations of the verb “to be.”
Passive—“Employees are seen by their managers as responsive and enthusiastic.”
Active—“Managers see their employees as responsive and enthusiastic.”
In addition, passive sentences can foster weasel-like communication and hide who’s responsible for an action and, in this way, evade accountability rather than declare it. For example, if a contract states “the rules for the homeowners will be enforced” but doesn’t note who will enforce those rules, what results? Ambiguity. Confusion. Inaction.
In an active sentence, someone (subject) does something (verb) to someone/something (object). Example: The employees (subject) implement (verb) the new strategy (object). Who’s doing the implementing? The employees. Thus, it’s clear who’s accountable for the action.
Your challenge: Use the clues here to notice passive sentences and change them to active.
When you know how to write with precision and accuracy, your professional reputation builds and your career can soar. Barbara McNichol is passionate about helping business professionals add power to their pen. To assist in this mission, she has created a word choice guide Word Trippers: The Ultimate Source for Choosing the Right Word When It Really Matters with details at www.WordTrippers.com.
Today’s Word Tripper:
Compliment, complement – “Compliment” means to praise while “complement” means to complete or enhance something. (Note: the words “complete” and “complement” both use the letter “e”) “The wine steward deserves many compliments. The wine complements the food extremely well.”
Related posts from Barbara:
- Word Trippers: When to use “like vs. “such as”
- Word Trippers: How to Choose Words with Intention Every Time
Barbara McNichol works with business professionals to provide expert editing of nonfiction books and help them improve their writing skills. Over the past 22 years, she has placed more than 320 books on her editing “trophy shelf.”
On a crusade to boost the quality of business writing, she offers a monthly ezine Add Power to Your Pen as well as a WordShop on Business Writing Essentials and her word choice guide Word Trippers: Your Ultimate Source for Choosing the Perfect Word When It Really Matters. Because she keeps tripping over more Word Trippers (pairs such as “except vs. accept” that get mixed up), she produces Word Tripper of the Week ezine (www.wordtrippers.com)
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